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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2014 12:41 pm 
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I love this thread too! You two are really good, I enjoyed your poems. :D Laughed when I read Schattenboxen. :lol: Brilliant.

I was tempted to give it a try as well and then I was inspired by the start of spring today. I apologise if this is bad, I haven't written anything in German for years so I suspect my grammar might have gotten pretty shoddy. :sped: I wasn't even sure if I'd dare post this. :lol:

Start of spring, the bitter version:

Frühlingstagundnachtgleiche

Frühling
Jetzt fingt er wirklich an
Die Tage länger
Den Dunkel weg

Tag und Nacht
Ist alles nur
Die selbe Scheisse
Doch
In tiefen dunklen Nacht
Sieht man mindestens
die Scheisse nicht
Ich hasse den verdammten Frühling

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2014 3:58 pm 
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OK, let´s do some of these quick´n´easy aka cheap oneliners:

Seelenverwandte

Im Liebesnest wartet die Pest


Nachtsinfonie

Die Maus knabbert
am Bettgestell Ende aus


Einsam zu zweit

Das Himmelbett war nicht
so nett
du auch nicht



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This one ist the best, so Tillchen-esque!

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This one is cool, too, and it has Tillchen´s beloved fish and sea theme!

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 12:40 am 
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Girls you are just incredible :shock: :angel:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 2:02 am 
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Alles schön

Ich schiesse dir
den Kopf vom Hals
fällt herunter in den Mais
grabe dort ein tiefes Loch
war es Liebe
vielleicht doch


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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 6:11 am 
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Bwahahaha, love that last one. And the illustrations. Although they are way too wholesome for Till. X)

@Kettenhund I really like the grumpiness of yours. You nailed the Till-spirit!

Here's a poem about aging and the effects of bleaching one's hair:

Eitelkeit

Mein blondes Haar
fällt in meine Kehle
Ich huste, undenkbar
und dann heimlich zähle

die restlichen Stränge
auf meiner Zunge

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2014 7:49 am 
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Good one, paprika :wink:

Heilsversprechen

Dein Anlitz so schön
dein Blick so kühn
lauf mit dem Wind
um die Wette
die nächste Toilette
ist gar nicht so weit
komm mein Kind
Erlösung
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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Sat Mar 22, 2014 6:22 am 
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Oh, Von B!

Here's one about the artist's loathing of fan adoration:

Ekel

Rosenblüten
zu meinen Füßen
Vergiftete Dornen
in meinen Augen

Du bist so verliebt
aber deine Geschenke
habe ich nie geliebt

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:13 pm 
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I simply love Ekel, paprika! 8)

And here´s your typical "can´t sleep/crying in the night" piece:

In heller Nacht

Pein kriecht mir durch die Venen
Ein Meer an ewig Tränen
fließt mir von der Fratze
auf labbrig Matratze
lieg ich so da
die Sterne so nah
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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2014 11:36 am 
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Thank you, Von B!
Unfff, "Ein Meer an ewig Tränen", how perfect.
Here's a sailing-themed one, because we all know Till secretly wants to be a sea captain. All he needs is a boat, a beard and a pipe, and he's good to go!

Schiffbruch

Ich schaue auf die Segel
Es wird abgerissen
Driften durch den Nebel
Das habe ich Gewissen:

Wo die Ströme nehmen mich
Gibt es einfach keine land

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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I've already said that, but I really love you, girls!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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And now let´s be really, really, really provocative, Tillchen style :shock:

In tiefen Schächten

fickt ein Mann
weil er halt nichts anderes kann


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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Haiku !!!! LOL :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Paprika I loved your "Ekel" and vB you're a genius..."In tiefen Schächten" :rolling: :rolling: :rolling:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:23 pm 
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I've been trying to open "In stillen Nächten" again, oh my I burst out laughing every time now :rolling: I hate you all :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :hug:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Nice one, Von B!
Here's one about the aftermath of a brawl (preferably outside a bar, over a man-to-man argument concerning one's young girlfriend):


Flecken


Auf dem Schnee
ein heiße See

Die rote Ekstase
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