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 Post subject: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 6:39 am 
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As suggested by the lovely nina hagen, I have resolved to open a thread dedicated to all potential Till ghostwriters! Think you can join me in the arduous task of writing Till's poems for him while he's away, waltzing around in his youngster clothing? Then this is the place to showcase your work! Remember, a Till poem contains pain, angst, self-loathing, multiple references to the sea, the forest and the mountains, a pinch of grief, a good dose of darkness, all combined to a solid base of German expressionism, German Romanticism, and shocking imagery! Rhymes are encouraged, but not obligatory. Till will understand.

To begin the festivities, I shall post my previous poems, and add today's new feature! All poems are written in German, but can easily be translated via Google Translate. 8)

Thomas

Der Finger hat er verloren
in den kalten Bergen

Und hielt er den Atem an
wenn der Schmertz kam

In der nacht



Jogginghose

Ich trage meine Jogginghose
und mein alter Körper
Ich kleide mich
in herrlicher Hässlichkeit
Um bereit zu sein
Für die zeitlose Straßen
der aktiven Verleugnung


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Today's poem is all about Till's relationship with the paparazzi.

Fotojäger

Ich habe keine Angst
Wenn die Blitzlampen platzen
Denn ich lebe in Schatten
Unter meine Augenlider

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 8:18 am 
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paprika, Tillchen should hire you! Here´s my take, took me like two minutes, well, maybe writing Tillchen-style poetry isn´t that demanding after all :shock:

Zusammen

Die Nacht so schwarz
kein Stern leuchtet mir
mein Lager liegt so brach
ich will, ich will zu dir

Dein Schoss so allein
er ruft so laut nach mir
und werden wir vereint
so soll das Bett in Flammen stehn

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 8:25 am 
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I love it, VB!
Especially the part about the "Schoss so allein". That is SO Wilder Wein-ish. Good work. :bounce:
AND you've got rhymes. Amazing.

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Thanks! Here´s another one:

Abgrund

Mein Herz es brennt
brennt lichterloh
ich reiss es aus
steck es in deinen Po

der Po so tief
so dunkel und so feucht
treib heraus den Mief
damit das Herz nicht bricht

Es wird nicht brechen
muß es erstechen
erdolchen es treffen
damit die Liebe weiterlebt

Weiterlebt so rein
lebt und gedeiht
so klein und gemein
wird für die Ewigkeit sein

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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"Steck es in deinen Po" :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Well, writing Tillchen-styled poetry requires your dosage of debauchery, doesnt it? 8)

Zaubermusik

Ich stecke meine Flöte
in deine dunkle Tüte
und tute und wühle
mach mir Mühe
bis du singst
singst und leuchtest
wie die Morgenröte
dort am Firmament
vereint wir zwei getrennt
unser Los
es blüht unser Schoss
kurz wie die Königin der Nacht

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 11:32 am 
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Unnfff, I love your use of the word Morgenröte. <3

Here's another from me!

Wund

Es gibt ein Loch
in meinem Herzen

Auf der Brust
Ein roter Faden
eine ruhige Lust
dass langsam tropft
bis meine Lenden

Ich steck' den Finger
und wünchte ich mir

Ich tot wäre

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Another generic instant Tillchen-styled crap:

Der Horizont

Ich sitz auf meinem Sofa
doch hätte gern ein Mofa
könnt es reiten
könnt es treiben
die Welt erobern
alles hier und dort erproben

Doch häng ich nur im Hafen fest
kein Sturm bepflückt mein heimlig Nest
so träum ich süß von fernen Ländern
in meinen ärmlichen Gewändern

Die Sehnsucht ist mir lieb Gefährtin
Fernweh hält mir die Hand
Dort am sandig Strand
liegt mein Herz begraben
kalt und tot
ist mein täglich Brot


And now for your generic Tillchen copulating poem:

Frühling

Die Schlange kriecht am dürren Gras
so wird die Wiese ach so nass
die Nässe leckt das Schlangenhaupt
den Sinnen voll und ganz beraubt

so nimmt das Schicksal seinen Lauf
schüttelt hämmert tief im Schoss
Milch tropft vom Kriechtierknauf
das Ungetüm springt los
ist von dannen

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This is awesome! :-) I'm loving this thread.

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Ich. Liebe. Euch. Zwei. :heart:

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Schattenboxen

Ein Kampf tobt in meiner Brust
Vernunft ringet mit der Lust
Das Fleisch so stark
der Geist unwillig
warum bin ich denn so billig?

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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:rolling: :rolling: :rolling: :rolling: Love this! The last one is awesome :lol: :lol: Don't think I can top you two but maybe I'll try :)

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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Amazing! "Warum bin ich denn so billig". Bwahahahaha

Here's another morbid one from yours truly:

Krankheit

Milch in die Augen
Und Blut im Mund
Was kann ich sagen
Ich war nie gesund

Asche in der Brust
Und Staub in den Adern
Tust du, was du musst
Ich sterb' immer gern

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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You are both amazing and make me wanna try, although the level of my German is most like "The cat is on the mat" :D

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 Post subject: Re: Ghostwriting for Till
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I say, give it a shot!
I only studied German for two years. For these poems, I used my limited vocabulary and my basic knowledge of syntax, and use Google Translate to help me with the rest. There's also this neat little website when you need a word that rhymes but your German's too poor: http://www.reimemaschine.de/reim_suchen.php

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